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Monday 18 November 2013

Official Wording of the Titles

Official Wording of the Titles:

The first list is the one which was on the previous post which we decided to keep but apply a few tweaks to. 

Version 3
1) coping was easy
2) haunted by someone's thoughts
3) haunted by yourself
4) hunting the one that hurt you
5) Unhinged

The first thing we changed was the first line, the word 'coping' wasn't clear, therefore we thought that language more specific to illnesses would be more appropriate. Therefore the word 'medication' seemed like a better option as it definitely referenced the illness. 
We decided to change what person the text was in, and so we changed it to 3rd person as it follows conventions of psychological thrillers. We made the 4th line present in order to show that its ongoing and this is the main point of the overall film. We also did this to hint at the climax.  

Version 3
1) the medication worked
2) until she was haunted by someone's thoughts
3) she became haunted by herself
4) now she hunts the one that hurt her
5) Unhinged


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